I'm hearing some cool ideas in this track, the only problem is that it's too random and incoherent. There needs to be more structure, I think that's the only thing you're really lacking here.

I could be really nice, but I'm going to give you what I really think, this -isn't chaotic or poorly done enough-. You need to throw out more rules, get deeper into the breakcore territory, but improve your mixing and sound design. You clearly have an incomplete knowledge of what makes a "listenable" dubstep song, and I think it would benefit you more going in the opposite direction.

The only thing this is lacking is coherent progression. It all sounded pretty random, almost like experimental.

Let me know when you make more :)