This kind of brings me a peaceful feeling more than anything else - however, many parts were very hard to hear. There was also some progression, however, I found the song strophic with very little variation (you can still have the same thematic material throughout, you just need to make the strophic feel like it's not strophic if you know what I mean). Because it was so quiet, it is simply hard to tell what is going on, diminishing it's potential. This song has lots of potential, however, I feel that it was not capitalized on as much as it should have.