water spider

Pretty good! Drums are too loud, though. Kind of reminds me of Cosmic Dreamer.

I'm not givin you the full 5 because the drums are drowning out the other instruments. Other than that it's amazing! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

I'm gonna write you a review! Yay my first review on Newgrounds!

GOOD STUFF
- Chords sound is cool
- Drum sounds are nice

NOT GOOD STUFF
- Your drums are WAY too loud. I can barely hear anything below your drums.
- This song is more repetitive than your average track. Emerald Brine had nice stuff in it, but this is just the same idea repeated way too many times with minimal sound additions.
- Your ending cuts off the reverb tail of your sounds. Before you render from FL, first see how long it takes for the sounds to properly fade out, and be sure to include that tail in your render.

Score: 6/10

From what I can hear, it's not a bad song, but the drums are way too loud and I can't hear much else.