You did good kid. You did good. Keep up the awesome. :)

- V

hmm the intro was a bit scatterbrained but fit well
that sweep synth is awesome sounding
drop into the drums was decent, could have used some sub drops and a bigger build
drum beat itself wasn't so much acid, it was more...... electro house
the main synth would fit better in a more uplifting song to be honest
that sweep went from an intro sweep to your pad, pretty nice actually, i do that sometimes
crash drum into more sounds was pretty nice
drums could have used more hihats
mmm dat acid
mmm that crash drum but the pitch for the melody afterwords was a little distracting
the ending was pretty good
honestly for a first attempt it wasn't that bad, the drum beat reminded me of celldwellers small drum beat in his song ''goodbye'' he made a drum beat similar to yours but it lasted for like 5 seconds
this was a pretty good attempt at DnB or your first time, i really hope to actually hear more DnB from you in the future
as always keep it up because every song of yours has at least a bunch of things i like, i'm literally ready to add you to the list of my favorite producers because your music is making it hard for me to listen to anyone else
alright i'm done fangirling XD
hope to hear more awesome music soon ^_^