Variety?

This is worse than my songs on variety! It is a good melody and nice beat with the kick ass snare, but it is the same ole damn thing man! Make some variations to it man! Come check out my music to see how i do it.

Sorry

No variety. Use this as the back noise (bass) and make a rythm, extend the overall time and you should be done.
Very nice loopage, but still. It is catchy, but needs work. I have a woofer (spelled wrong) and the song sounds the same with it on as it does off. Try to work on that.
The song is to basic and generic, but I think with a little work (and time) it will be good. Remember: variety, and way more bass. There are many examples of great techno songs on NG, so listen to them a few times.
Try to get rid of the static noise in the background of the song (I don't know any music terms) and that will help make it more clear. Needs a lively beat that is fresh, and needs more synths. Try to change the speed of the song during the song to make it interesting.
Spend time on your songs. You spend so much time on the loopage of your songs that you forget, nay, ignore the song. You make songs in one day, good songs take time (even techno).
A synth has many different sounds; USE THEM! Loops CAN be intense and catchy. (You are probably wondering why I shouldn't make a song myself and then talk, but I play the piano, and I don't have the right equipment to do songs. Plus I need money)
-SaulaurZA