Okay, this mix sounds really flat. The panning lead is annoying and too loud, and everything else sounds like it had all the moisture sucked out of it and packaged for space travel. Even the drums sound meh. It's a shame because the composition is pretty good, although it could use more instrumentation.

Oh god, this is perfect for my rpg game, mind if i use it? Credits are added at the end

I listened to it on loop for over an hour.
Enough said.

crash is to loud agen and leads to high here and ur limiters pushing the highs down its kinda awk
dont let limiters do your mastering :p
the melodys really nice in this song

Clearly needs more skeletons.

Clear and smooth direction, that enriches the simple beat.
You could even out the instruments, though. The beginning seems overly loud while some finer instruments seemed a lot more subdued-

Either way, a great piece of work. Good job!