Hey

It was a good first track. Now you need to take it another step. Make some of your own beats and melodies and combine them to form an awesome body to a great song. I've got some pretty crappy songs..especially lately..cause I don't have the full version of fruity loops. I know you're using fruity. Just can't tell whether you have the full or the trial. Anyway, I said what I said to let you know I'm not some sort of a techno god or anything, lol. But if you keep at it, you'll attain much better understanding. Peace man! -Andy