The song is a bit high pitched and I think it would sound better with a different synth. Make some parts with higher pitch and some with lower. I'm just saying It could sound a lot better. Good luck!
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I've been working on this for a while. SOUNDS AWESOME!
The deal with the title is that this song is a story about a man's life, and how decisions can catch up with you. I call this, THE FUTURE POLICE!
ShiffyDoesThings responds:
Thanks for advice! I could always use some.
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