Storytime - Hopeless

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Storytime - Hopeless

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Just a short skit with Little Sister voice. :p

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xxxZigZagxxx

2015-04-12 23:18:29

0:00 Moody strings. Interesting.
0:10 Oh, this is voice acting.
0:20 Hmm... the manipulation of the voice is a bit too harsh on the pitching I think.
0:38 I like the sound design though.
0:45 Except I can't really hear what you're saying. I hear "everyone is afraid". "Shame and lies." "-one another-" but apart from that I can't hear much. I think you need to mix it so people can hear your voice and what you're saying.
1:38 "-when in Rome-" I can't hear anything apart from that either.
1:50 "-let us sleep there."

So yes. I think the major flaw in this is that I can only hear about 20% of the words you are saying. It might be the way that you've pitched your voice up, or the EQ'ing, but I think one of the major things in voice acting is to be able to hear the voice, which is a bit of an understatement. Perhaps mix this again so that it is audible. That is of paramount importance.

thekmanproductions responds:

I'm sorry, I do have the best microphone. Money is tight. I do try to make the best out the limited supplies that have, you have to at least admit it's pretty good for what I had. I mean, I do try. I'm afraid I'm not going to redo this, however, I will try to keep this in mind the next time.

Also, my accent takes a toll on me, I do try to mask it....but it just doesn't always come out perfect. Overall, thank you for the review. If the next one also sucks, sorry...