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This is my first audio clip, please give constructive critisizm and comment.

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Actually, it's pretty good.

A bit repetitive in the beginning. Maybe make beginnings a bit shorter and then overlap it with the main song and stuff? Just a suggestion.

It actually gets better the longer you listen to it. lol

Very nice!!!

-It was music to my ears, quite literally I might add. I dunno what to say, music is how you want to make it, so at least make it great (which is what you did). Keep at it man, this really is some killer stuff!

-SuperDrummer146

-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall"

Torkey responds:

Thanks SuperDrummer146 , im looking forward to making more music in the future, thanks for the review again!

nice

I like the sax/trumpet thing at the beginning, but it does get a little repetitive. The beat was good too, you might want to add some bass to compliment the song. It's very loungey.

ah wait... I hear some bass. I have been proven wrong. Just make it come in a bit sooner, get the groove going before people lose interest. You need to work on your arrangement too, maybe don't completely take out the beat... Minor concerns though. Nice job, I hope to hear from you.

~cornandbeans

Torkey responds:

Thanks for the review and advice! I really appriciate it alot and will be implimenting it in my next songs.

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Uploaded
Sep 12, 2006
10:49 PM EDT
File Info
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2.4 MB
2 min 42 sec

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.