=== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review ===

Holy... so I almost wrote this off as terrible, but then all this awesome stuff started happening. (In particular, 0:28 to 0:44 is just phenomenal.) So I almost called this song awesome, but then it got really messy again. To me, it sounds like you are a very talented composer - some of your melodies are just fantastic here. However, and this is a very large however, your approach to sharing these melodies in the world is to take the worst possible instruments you can find and PLAY THEM ALL AT THE SAME TIME. So, like, please please spend some more time on sound design in the future! Because I love a lot of your melodies (this is very rare for me), but I just can't get over the sound design and arrangement aspects of this song.

Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
Mixing: 2/4
Arrangement: 2/4
Composition: 4/4
Overall (this is not an average): 6.5/10

This is bloody pumping smart!

This is pretty good.