There isn’t really a ton to say about this. It isn’t the worst thing that you could listen to, but it doesn’t fit in the DnB genre, the drops take too long to buildup and don’t fit that well, and there is a lack of energy throughout the song. I’m not the most experienced, but I’m giving my honest feedback. In my opinion, you need more practice with the DnB genre, and when reverb is appropriate. You need to focus on using more popular songs to learn, and Im pretty sure that nearly everyone would say the same thing. In short, it isn’t terrible, but it needs a lot of work.

this isnt even drum n bass. start listening to the genre and practice more.

your melodies don't make sense, the flow is off, and there is just way too much reverb.

im being blunt here but thats the only way people learn instead of sugarcoating everything.