Nice

So I like the "HEAVY-METAL" why this is so short I dont know because you ahve some good epth here that could really take off into more like a song and track so my tip here would be stretch this out longer and in those fade out gaps you could build it up with other strings and instraments and such, anyways nice little loop here.

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so my tip here would be stretch this out longer and in those fade out gaps you could build it up with other strings and instraments and such

~X~

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And part 3 is as good as the other ones. I especially like riff number 3 :) .