Neat.

hello Gobrowns1

I can see that you're abundent experience in making ambiant music has leaked out to this song. This song sounds much more ambiant then house, I think increasing the tempo, and mixing it up melodic wise, making that kick louder would have been good starts to making it a great house song.

The percussional beat was good, not the best, but pretty fine.

I'm sorry if these suggestions don't make any sense, i'm dominent in instrumental music myself, so I don't really know as much about house and electronic music as mich as I would like to.

The melody was a tad bland, thats what made me think that ambiant over house, for sure you need better melodies.

I would like to ask you to listen to my new track under the alias MaestroRage
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1714459

That is one of my better melodic tracks, I hope you'll listen and see what I mean. I'm not saying this song needs melody like that, but I do feel a better melodic lead would be better.

I'm fiving these songs, their scores are too low for what I feel they are worth.

Keep them coming gobrowns1