Decent. I would have loved to hear you use a bit more power in your voice though. At certain parts anyways. Altogether I enjoyed it.
LYRICS:
You can’t escape the feeling that you feel inside
Livin’ in denial to cover up what you feel inside
Freak the hell out and eventually find what you need in life
Or stay calmer and figure it out through the smoother ride
Cause’ you’re gonna drown
(x4)
Findin’ the truth
Hiding from the truth
Deny the truth
Never tell a lie
Sticking around
Just to feel let down
You’re gonna feel
Life is coming for you
I’m not one to talk
Wrote it on the chalk
Board at my school
I’m not a fool
Can’t you see?
Disobey the rules just to see the consequence
Continue to do it don’t go too far, don’t go too far
Cause you’re gonna drown
It’s a big let down
Findin’ the truth
Hiding from the truth
Deny the truth
Never tell a lie
Sticking around
Just to feel let down
You’re gonna feel
Life is coming for you
I’m not one to talk
Wrote it on the chalk
Board at my school
I’m not a fool
Cant I see?
Never gonna tell a lie again
Never gonna let you down again
Never gonna fail to come around
Always gonna answer to the sound
Never gonna make you feel ashamed
Never gonna make you take the blame
Even if I do achieve my fame
I promise to always stay the same
Findin’ the truth
Hiding from the truth
Deny the truth
Never tell a lie
Sticking around
Just to feel let down
You’re gonna feel
Life is coming for you
I’m not one to talk
Wrote it on the chalk
Board at my school
I’m not a fool
Will I see?
Decent. I would have loved to hear you use a bit more power in your voice though. At certain parts anyways. Altogether I enjoyed it.
Yeah, vocals aren't necessarily my forte. Thanks for the feedback btw!
Great song! I really liked the solo towards the end.
Thanks man! I appreciate your feedback! :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.