Hi can I use this song for a geometry dash level
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I made this song while reading for my exam. And it describes my frustration in that period.
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I liked, but here's what you can do to improve this; 1: structure the song better. the drums are complete mess 70% of the time, the other they're used quite well. 2: Get some lyrics in here, or at least some growls or screams or a combination of both. 3: Have an intro showing your decent into frustration, getting gradually heavier, I say about 25 to 37 seconds should do it.
Other than that the guitar work is pretty good, it's heavy and sounds like Machine Head if they were a prog metal band.
Arkaft responds:
Thank you! I do not think i will put any more effort in this song. This is just something I made in an hour, when I had a break from exam preparations. But if i later want to make a real song of it i will take your advise and structure it better and use more time on it! Appreciate reviews, thank you!
I like the first 30 seconds (almost exactly),0:51-1:12,1:36-2:02,2:22-end, are all passable sections. The rest is just plain not good. (sorry for the bluntness) If re-made without just speeding up sections and adding in WAY too many instruments in other sections and replaying sections over (yes i heard that a few times towards the end especially) it could be good.
Arkaft responds:
No offense taken. This song is just something i made while reading for my exam. I made this song under an hour. I doubt that I'll ever do anything more with this song, since this song will not be the same if i make it under different circumstances, and then it loses meaning. But I appreciate feedback!
can i use this for one of my song's?
Arkaft responds:
For one of your songs?
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