Midnight fire

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Midnight fire

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KoraMusic

2014-08-17 01:07:39

Well since you're so open to opinions then I will; Firstly more harmonic progression, there are a few to many drone notes that stay the same for over 10bars at a time. I know it's midi, but even still it's good practice to work on shaping the piece even when it's a simple loop. For example try separating the beat track into separate tracks and think how you want to lead from there. Anyways it's always great to see artists posting their works as openly as you, good luck!
-Kora

PerfectComplexion responds:

Thankyou for your feedback. Through the help of my beta testers and through my own self criticism, i am aware that my songs are more like loops pieced together, rather actual songs. with the program i use it's hard to seam them together, but I am still learning, with every piece i make i try my best to throw something new in there that i've learned from in the last piece. It's really trial and error.

Your feedback is much appreciated, and i will try my best to fix what you've brought to my attention.