Cool! Kinda liking the beat and it's melody. If I were you I would make a different bassline, the only bass I hear is the kick and in the background there is just a weak wobbly sidechained bass. For the build starting at 0:54 I think you could have used a rise sound. At 1:08 and 2:58 , I prefer an instant start of the 4-on-the-floor kickbeat instead of waiting to kick it in for 1 bar. Also, I really miss the open and closed hihats, especially in this type of music. It would make a huge different and it gives the beat a huge boost. I really like the mixdown. Good use of up and downlifters. There is no such problem about the mastering. Not too loud nor too harsh. I also like the melody change in the end at 3:50! Good work dude!
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A bit more complete now - Sounds kind of too harsh and loud now, have to fix that sometime.
Lalalo14 responds:
Yeah the bass kinda suck now! I EQ'd it down too much because I was getting a distortion sound with the combination of the main lead, kick and the bass.
I totally agree about the build-up. Now it's just a standard snare getting faster. It needs something more. Going to try to add a upriser there!
There actually is a open snare that begins at 1:35, but I think it's too low and not as crisp as it should be right now.
Thanks alot for the review man! One of the most detailed I've gotten and I like it!
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