Really nice

So this was nice and you can really feel the ambiant in this and flows along stuff like this that really keep me interested in these types you have some Razor Sharp ideas that push it forward, Well I hope to hear more of your work soon, but besides that you really pushed some good quality sound here

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I like the progression and simplicity. That guitar at :36 sounds a little harsh, though. It also sounds a bit muddy with the strings in the background. Once you learn more about mixing and mastering, that'll be fixed. Try bringing out different pitches in some instruments more than others in the Parametric EQ (press F9 in FL Studio. Right click one of the inserts > link selected channels > to this track. An instrument should show up (it's highlighted in the Step Sequencer). Then, on the right-hand side of the window, click the drop-down arrow next to the numbered tabs, then click "Parametric EQ 2." You're welcome.) You should also get rid of all the tones below 200 hertz. If you have no idea what I'm talking about, just PM me, btw. Also, I think there were some slight balance issues. For example, I thought the beat at :55 was a little too loud, and overshadowed the rather impressive melodic content a bit. Overall, though, I'm extremely impressed with the structuring, transitions, and harmonies. The ending bothered me a bit, though - it just cut off so suddenly. I think it works very well as a loop, though. For your first time, this is a fantastic piece, though. Do you know how bad my first piece was?! Keep up the good work! :D

7.5/10

Pretty good! I'm a 5 year veteran of FL and i gotta say this is a pretty solid start! you want to remember to keep your instruments and percussions compressed and EQed and such but you probably have a long learning curve ahead before you really figure that out. Your melodics are solid tho! and your structure too. I dig it! If you could tell me what you think about my latest track "My World" that would be great!