simple but uplifting

I really want to rate this a full on 5, but there's something missing. Its really phenomenal what you've got so far but it needs a little more.

Maybe it needs even the most subtle hint of instruments other than you vocals and the strings. Like a soloing trumpet, or percussion, or something somber to go with the solemn theme? This sounds like the absolute bones of a song, not really the whole shebang.

But what you've got so far I really like! I would love to hear a more fleshed out version!

Keep making music good sir/madam! Although I assume sir from the voice!