cheerful melody, it doesn't feel as if the vocals connect with the melody, maby thats just me, kudos on getting the vocals tho, those seem to be hard to come by, keep making music, this is great stuff :)!

- Pandasticality

I like how it opens up with that raindroppy sound. I thought the reverb worked well for the song. The singer sounds really great as well.

It sounds a bit weird when that other voice comes in the forefront at 2:13 and 1:25. On the contrast though, the echo/delay affect on the voice at 1:25 was beautiful. The song overall is very calming and it was definitely a good listen. Very constructive.

I really like this, its far more creative than a lot of the things I hear on NG. You tried a lot of strange stylings and the japanese vocals are super refreshing, that girl really has talent.

But I have to say I'm not a fan of the reverb quality on the instruments, nor am I a fan of some of the instruments. The flute was good at the end, and the piano is fine for the most part, but the bass seemed strange to me, and the snapping was a bit loud.

Also the vocals give that close feel like an acoustic song, so the reverb on all the instruments give the wrong vibe in contrast to the vocals.

You want it to sound a bit closer like she's singing in the same room with a few simple instruments being played.

It makes me want to listen to a J Rabbit track, which is much more close and personal like the singers voice is.

Keep making music dude! This is really good especially compared to a lot of the more unoriginal tracks on NG!