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May 21, 2014 | 2:47 AM EDT
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7.6 MB
3 min 20 sec
4.35 / 5.00

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Rated 4.35 / 5 stars
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952 Plays | 31 Downloads
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I do not know why I am here today

everything is fading away

and when I close my eyes

there's nothing left of me

It's everyday

I'm falling into this abyss

and when I look into your eyes

it lifts me up from this abyss

it lifts me out of my own hole (hell)

and when I close my eyes

there's nothing left of me

it's everyday

I'm falling into this abyss



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

I can here the vocals much better on this version. The mix is still really good. The only criticism I would have is that your voice needs some improvement. It might be the style you are going for too... I know that Trent Reznor used to sing very ... how do I explain it? kind of whiny. I think he pulled it off, I think you need more work at it. I not saying that your voice sounds bad, I like your tone. You just need more control over it, more projection, and maybe a little work on pitch. Otherwise, I loved the song. It is really a great beginning to something very epic.

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Spoonukem responds:

I appreciate the encouragement, vocals are much harder than most people realize! :) Thanks for the review man!


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not a fan of the vocals. However, instrumentally, the song is pretty impressive. Crisp, clean, dark, and it has a steady drive. Not bad!

Spoonukem responds:

Appreciated! Thanks for your thoughts! :)