Nice. Kinda sounds influenced by Sick of it All and Rise Against.
Lyrics:
I feel the force upon my face
A source of conflict i eagerly embrace
Another mode strongly displaced
A constant barrage of which we can trace
As we attempt to turn lead into gold
Obtain the heart of the earth
We burn
The fight goes on
The struggle pushes us to find where we belong
As the battle continues length and breadth
Fear neither pain, worry nor the death
Enjoy this second, this quickening of breath
Glorious sparring will fill your epitaph
As we attempt to live and uphold
Obtain the sense of our worth
We learn
The fight goes on
The thrill within the moment moving us along.
The attack
As the advance ensues
The riposte
A counter movement initially imbues
I detect a feint slight of hand
A lunge and parry quickly gains
To disengage the thought as it stands
As i remise, the feeling still remains
Any second now one of us will fall
Our bodies drained from toil and pain
The ground will offer up a call
To lay upon and rest our weary reigns
(As we attempt to process and control
Obtain the drive we've unearth)
We yearn
The fight goes on
The potential will come to prove ourselve all wrong
The fight goes on
The battle exists as long as you respond
We move upon
The fight goes on
The effect left will change the world when you have gone
Nice. Kinda sounds influenced by Sick of it All and Rise Against.
I don't know if I would have classified it as punk though it does have some punk elements to it. I think there are enough other elements to this to outweigh the amount of punk elements but music classification isn't always cut and dry either you know? Ah just my take on it I like this though it's pretty good and the production quality is nice.
You know, I was back and forth about that for the longest time. At first submitted it as Heavy Metal, then felt like it wasn't really heavy enough. So, I switched it to Punk, and felt like that was a mistake. Moved it to Heavy Metal and then back to Punk, then realized I wasn't doing anyone any favors lol. Ultimately, I think you are right. This sits in a more Hardcore or Metal genre. Anyway, thanks for the review and the thoughts!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.