Some constructive criticism:
First of all, I think you could use some better samples. The melody piano sounds seemed too loud and surprising. Also, some notes in the melody seemed a bit off-key, but that may be what you have been going for. I'm not sure if I'd call it sad or tragic, it sounds more dramatic to me.
I think you did a good job by layering the two tracks together - good harmony.
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This is the loop that is sad. Public Domiain, Use for whatever, just toss me a credit.
yetanotherjohn responds:
I appreciate the feedback.Thanks!
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