this isn't too bad actually. the effects are very interesting and fit well with the sounds. but i feel like the main synth or whatever could be stronger and bolder. overall it's pretty well put together considering the effects you were using for your sounds.

I'm gonna have to agree with DjGubkafish here too. However its really nice to experiment so don't let this discourage you :)

Sorry its painful to listen because effects are too vibrant . Melody just doesn't connect .

When you make any song you should start with clear melody and then maybe convert in to another vst that way it doesn't sound like a mess .