it has potential i give it 4 stars ^_^

WOW!

Simply wow...
I love so much this first part with the piano.
It sounds like an explosion of music.

Im speechless...

Sweet! Another song added to my favorite list!

please oh please send me the piano stem without the distortion I'd love to do a remix of this

the piano progression and composition I think was wonderful - I think when the drums came in at first they sounded a bit out of time and off
the guitar was sexy with good bits but a bit amateurish
rather than repeat I have to say I agree with most of what johnfn says below

lovely song though and its nice to hear something with more different instruments from you

Once again, you've submitted a masterpiece. I hope that one day I can become as good as you.