Excellent job on this. Sounds like the first Five Finger Death Punch album. But I still think it's awesome.
My first metal submission to Newgrounds is very dear to me, so here I've updated it. Now utilizing my newest equipment, a better DAW, and all the experience I've gathered from my projects since.
Thanks again to Tremulos, for letting me use his track again!
My first version: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/536464
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From the corners of my eyes I see you waiting, watching.
Hairs stand and I shiver, but I know you can't be real.
Sleepless nights, not a wink, that's how you came to be.
A figment of my overactive creativity.
I see you staring but I don't return the gaze, cause then you're gone.
I can't escape my own mind. I can't escape my own mind.
Insomnia.
You keep me awake but you're here because I can't sleep.
I can't win. I'm the helpless creator, with
eyes wide open under the sheets.
I see your eyes in a distant corner.
I feel your breath against my skin.
I hear you laugh when I close my eyes.
I feel your gaze, laid upon me.
You take me away.
Take me away.
Excellent job on this. Sounds like the first Five Finger Death Punch album. But I still think it's awesome.
yo this sounds like Five Finger Death Punch xD
"I feel your breath against my skin." ...sexy :P
Absolutely badass, man; the layering of the multiple vocal tracks sounds professional as fuck. You take my music to another level.
FUcking awesome, dude.. Nice and crisp, balanced. Cool mang!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.