I know you guys in newgrounds have different points of view of music different than many other places. I would like to get critics for this. Whether i am good or not. I plan to make this a dance electronic song with a singer (but still looking for that singer) It is very short cause i made it in 30 minutes or so.

Future Lyrics at
00:07 : You said that im living in the darkness
00:13 and noone ever comes.
00:15 You said you wanted me in your life but
00:20 you never said hello, hello, hello, hello, hello