As individual elements, your arrangements included go well individually but sounds messy all combined into one track. I have also notice on both my headphones & my ADAM's that your drum samples used keep ending up being drowned out by everything else. It would be worth introducing some more stereo widening to them & making them slightly louder. Apart from that, Mastering is fairly decent; I can hear everything nice and clear & you have some interesting sound design going on in your pieces.

Interesting piece for sure. Not sure if the dialogue was produced by you, but it fits for sure. Adds a lot to the abstractness of what was going into the beginning. I love how that synth just beaks through at around 3:12. The part that starts are 4:04 is my favorite part of the song. The wind/noise effects you added were very well done. It's a long song, but it kept evolving into something new, which I liked. Not exactly my genre in general, but this is still a very well put together song. Nice!