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Whoaness. Whoa. Hmmm... Where can I start? I'll just listen to the song over again...
Alrighty. The beginning, sadly enough, wasn't as interesting as the rest of the song for me. But when it started building up, I was like... Damnnnn, hella good. Yeah, a lot of mainstream hip-hop doesn't sound very much like this. Maybe you could find some underground stuff that would sound like this? Oh! And when the snare like... Pitched down for the first time I got really excited about review this song! So yeah...
The effects, again are good. :D But it'd be nice if that weird snap clap snare thingy had more as well. The snare in the back reminds me of some oldschool too. :D So that's fun. :P
The track itself isn't much if I had to say so myself. Lyrics play a huge role in the pace and fluidity of a hip-hop song and are the core of the track itself. A hip-hop track without lyrics is kind of meh. but I'm not saying you should have some. Just saying that if you compare your nice little dark and moody track here against... I don't know... Techn9ne or Gang Starr or something, it doesn't have the same feel / quality.
Actually... You can just ignore that last paragraph. It isn't TOO relevant. >_> So yeah. Good job. I think what is right now for you is the effects and stoof. More effects would make me really really really really happy. :)