I give you a 3, It was.... Alright. But I honestly feel you can do better you have it there, it just needs a bit of honing. You're supposed to be a bit crazy in this scene I know, and you need to work that. Make those high points accentuate like a sharp edge as opposed to a flat reading. Also a bit of a tip since I can hear some fuzz (I recently figured out how to properly due this using audacity) Is noise removal. So all you have is your voice. No staticy fuzz. Give me a pm if you want to work together sometime, I'm sure we could improve our acts with the critiquing!