this could be great if like pixel said you picked different synthgs. also, the two that you're trying to mold together in the beginning are off time and it dooesn't sound too good. just change the notes up a little bit. and like the others, you need to make the percussion more powerful. start messing with the effects panel. layer your kick with overdrive, parametric eq, and even a distortion with the levels turned down just to get more bang but not so much distortion.

I liked the intro but you need a new synthesizer. It sounds cluttered, and like Envy your songs are sounding the same. I liked the sound effects, also i could hardly even hear the drums over all the other sounds.