I like the bass deal, it's really unique and it matches the beat well, but the beat just doesnt kick in enough, to me. And not soon enough when it does kick in. Maybe if you made the synths in the background louder, it'd sound better? It's some good work, though. The second verse section has sorta what I'm talkin about. I like how it all fits together, though. I'll give you a solid 4 stars for it.

-DJDj