Abstract

Good use of synth stabs and backing glitch/fx to make an interesting soundscape. It's definately an interesting piece, but it lacks any real direction. I think it could be made into something a bit more defined. I would like to hear it grow from the mixed up style into something that resembles a beat and then build with the addition of layers of synths and sounds to take it to a nice crescendo. I can imagine adding a 4/4 beat/sound towards the end of the piece would enable you to take this trk wherever you wanted, but in a more musical sense. To me it sounds like someone messing around, but with a good knowledge of sounds and fx, but that's not enough to make it a good piece of music.

Very interesting, well done

Very focused ambient track, mood was consistent. Alot of the audio samples you used sounded like weapon effects, which is interesting because unless you focus directly on each noise you would never realize what they were. A casual listen reminds me of a mid 1940 nazi secret science research facility. "Gloam" is a very appropraite title because it's almost overwhelming in the way it produces an "evil scientific" theme. You may want to increase the gain for the quiet melody that loops periodically in the left channel, it would have intensified the song even more. Good job in creating a specific mood for the listener, there's not much I would change. 4/5

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