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Bye, not like anyone gives a shit :p

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kaneman

2013-12-13 21:20:11

This song held alot of promise
At :45 the melody had lots of potential. However this was not meant to be as the tune kept going too low key. If the pitch, tempo and key continued to rise from :45 to a drop at 1:15 instead of the rather inappropriate kick then this could have turned out really good. The snyth that started at 1:01 was setting the stage for this. Then after 1:15 I lost complete interest in the song It's just not for me.

But once again lots of potential, I want to put emphasis on that.

"Bye, not like anyone gives a shit :p"

Stick around you have more fans than me, and I'm sure they want to see more of you.

Z3rox responds:

Thank you so much! This is what i wanted to hear. I know what you mean about the pitch, key, and melody. That's the whole reason i uploaded it, so i could get input. However this isn't the final version, the project is very old and has been collecting dust for some time now but i do plan on finishing it someday. I was thinking about doing a collaboration on it but idk anyone who's up for that. I really appreciate the critique btw, and don't worry i won't leave i was being sarcastic back there haha.