This is kind of upsetting to me as a long time Pokemon player. I dont know what the music in the newer games sounds like, but I dont believe it would sound anything like this.

You've made a catchy song far too repetitive, in my opinion. The second part that you (finally) bring in at 2:50 shouldve started long before then. And then once it does start, it, itself, doesn't transition to the next part quickly enough.

Anybody that knows me as a reviewer knows that I'm typically very enthusiastic and positive. I'm very sorry that with this song, that simply cannot be the case.

I hope you improve in the future, man. It sounds like you have all the tools, you just need practice. I see this is from 5 years ago, so maybe you've already had that practice and have made those improvements.

At any rate, this song does not deserve to be on the front page of the charts of Modern Hip Hop- which is where I found it.

Show me better stuff! I know you can do it. :)

~DJDj

your a great artist :)