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Tcaojat: B - Fiz

Author Comments

Hey guys! This is my first time entering the Newgrounds Voice Acting Contest. I had fun putting this together, although I did make a few mistakes. It was hard to give my all since my only free recording time is at night when everyone at home is asleep, but hopefully you guys enjoy!

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The great elder tells of Jepht and Tol's first adventure together in their quest to undo the destruction which was brought upon their village. Only wish wish dust, a heavenly dust that grants wishes and shit, can save their home from a greater impending doom.
Discovering that wish dust can be obtained by destroying a guardian, they seek out to find their dust.

Music by Incompetech
Sfx by soundbible

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ZipZipper

2013-12-24 13:45:59

VAC 11 Judge Review:

Guardian in my pocket!!! Hahahahaha! That’s my favorite part. Okay well, that was a strange story that I think I followed all the way through. You had distinct characters, but the rock changing dialects towards the end threw me off a bit; it seemed awkward to me. There were nice reverb effects to simulate the cave, but mixing with the voices could still use a little bit of work I think, especially in the beginning with that excess white noise and random cutoff. Your voice sounded a bit timid with most of the characters, I think you could have really projected and solidified their personas. The script I thought was a little weak, but it still had definable parts. I just thought some sentences went on a bit too long and that the humor was sort of weak. But overall, I thought this was an okay piece, I really liked your Jepht character. Nice job!

Mechassassin responds:

Thank you very much for the review. Hopefully the next time I'll be able to let myself project better, since I was a bit conscious of the neighbors at 3 am. haha, of course, that's no excuse. Admittedly, everything was rather rushed and I do wish I had put a little bit more time into perfecting everything, but I am very thankful for your criticism especially towards the weak points of the piece. I'll definitely keep them in mind for VAC 12. Thanks again! :)