Hey Sirdangolot5,

I thought you did quite well at this song. The bass beat is catchy and it almost seems like the loss of tone in the first chord of four made it more unique. I like the automation, pads, layering of instruments and fx done. Good job with getting the right amount of sidechaining. I appreciate those subtle details with the drums on the transitions.

My only concerns are how you brought in the bass around 0:03. Not much of a explosion there.
1:30 I think you could have added a new melody over top. However the atmosphere this song brings actually kept my interest.
Ending is a bit weak.

Definitely one of the better trance songs here. Great choice with the instruments. Compositional weaknesses here and there take away the originality, but the emotion in this song makes up for it.
Keep it up.
5/5 review and vote