I definitely like your composition, its really flesehd out and sounds like a sweet boss battle I wanna have.
The only thing I could say is some of the drums could be tweaked to have more umph. Like I think the snare could have a bit more grungier hit and feel, one that almost feels like a hit. And some of the cymbals are noticably out of place in this very cyber song.
That's it lol. Probably better than what I can do though lol.