Twaddles of a Flue Faker

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Twaddles of a Flue Faker

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Watch PV Here
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=UI5UeDiTdRg&default_tab=comments

Vocaloid: Oliver
Production: Steampianist
Lyrics: Morbid - Morsel
http://morbid-morsel.deviantart.com/

first original vocaloid song. its about a flue faker (chimney sweep) in the 19th century. we used some vicorian slang

Lyrics:
I am a portrait which leaves you sighing sadly
Oh Laissez Faire what have you done?
I want to run away

The nobblers nailed my feet on the floor
Its starts to rust and attack my blood
I start to feel myself smile
Slowly loosing myself
But it did not do the trick
Oh woe is me
Oh can't they see that

I am a portrait which leaves you sighing sadly
Oh Laissez Faire what have you done?
I want to run away
For I am that portrait which leaves you sighing sadly
Oh Laissez Faire what have you done?
I want to run away

It will be a wrack up I'll make sure
When they stick me up the chimney
And now the air escapes me
Slowly loosing myself
But my master dragged me back down
Oh woe is me
Oh can't they see that

I'll be paper thin and pale
The "Scurfs" took my life away
I'm patiently sedated
Now my only exit is
Is the cold
Is the cold poetic... Scythe

I am a portrait which leaves you sighing sadly
Oh Laissez Faire what have you done?
I want to run away
For we are a portrait which leaves you sighing sadly
Oh Laissez Faire what have you done?
We want to run away

A thud sounding softly
I secretly disintegrate
Uneasy lamps draw back and forth
I've waited
For so long...

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PortgasDAceUser

2024-01-16 18:25:10

lovely

Oliver540

2021-05-08 06:41:12

Esto es... arte

DM692

2013-12-08 15:11:18

That beat, that harpsichord (?).

Very fucking cool concept for a song, the only Victorian Ballad I can really recall. Good choice in vocaloid, awesome beat, good samples, great mixing. Everything comes together rather nicely and it creates a really unique experience. There's not really anything I have to compare this to to provide better critique.

However, one thing is that "Laissez" is pronounced Lah-SAY, not LAY-siz. Additionally, the opening chorus sound more unnatural than the rest of the choruses. I'm not sure whether this is intentional or a result of there being less musical elements to cover it, but it's an issue for a very short period and only affects the track in a minor way.

steampianist responds:

Ahh well i think the pronounciation varies depending on the dialect.

Anothing thing is oliver (the vocaloid) sounded funny when saying Lah Say so we went with Lay Sez and decided not to make the Z silent cos it sounds like his saying "lazy fare" plus his 12 and an urchin i think correct pronounciations is the least of his worries hehehe

anyway thanks for the review really appreciate. As for the intro thats the result of either over compression on the vocaloid or lack of details in tuning

qwertyuiop095

2013-12-06 21:06:37

Man, I've never heard anything like this before and I really, REALLY like it! Thanks for the jams!
Keep doing what you're doing!

steampianist responds:

Thanks bro

sandordude

2013-12-05 09:37:04

Besides of the good music: I never care about the lyrics.. but these are really bizarre and mysterious.. which I like. nice!! :)

steampianist responds:

thank you very much