Very nice

So there was some really nice sound you have here I like the unique sound in this one almost has a bit of tetris sound in there aswell, maybe that was the intense, but anyways I think some drops and fades on this to allow for some nifty build up would be really cool, anyways nice work here.

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Really an interesting and well made tune.

Sounds like a song put in reverse. (judging by the location of the beats)
I do like your bridge between the 2 parts however, and then you go back and start the loop again. NICE! I can see this being used say if it were to fade out. Not bad. However the mood doesn't quite change to fit a cinematic, so in the same way, I don't see it being used. Great job though!!!!

I liked the melody and the harmonies weren't that bad, but I didn't really like the instruments or the beat. It looped pretty well, but the mood threw me off- it just seemed a bit rough and bass-y to be upbeat like most 8-bit videogame music. I'm not saying it has to be upbeat- I'm just not sure what the mood you were going for here is, and I think you should make that clearer, while also giving it more direction and form. Hope this review helped you. Keep at it, man. ;)