Nice sound

So this was some nice "SOUND" I like the build up but seems like there was a slow tempo about this and while that may have been your intent but some faster tempo quicker from the start it could creat that build up moment also, but for the mostpart I found this to be pretty interesting.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
a speed up at start of tempo as an idea.

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It's really relaxing and dreamy, but the crash and drums kind of ruined the mood for me. I like how you made it evolve into a more intense song, but I think the drums should still mirror the mood of the rest of the piece at all times. The emotion is good, and 2:17 was a highlight for me! I didn't like the transition at 2:51 so much, though- it seemed a bit sudden. The way it ended was a bit sudden, too. It's definitely a good start, but I think you should make it a bit smoother- it needs to flow more. Otherwise, love the instruments and feeling you put into it! Keep working on it! ;)