Being humble is a trait that will drive you to greatness, but you are way too hard on yourself! Your music is pretty interesting. I wasn't a huge fan of the piano lead halfway through, not the melody mind you - just the instrumentation. But all the choir stuff was tasteful, and the panning in the beginning was a nice touch. This legitimately kept my interested from beginning to finish. I suppose my only advice is to pay close attention to orchestration, choosing which instrument to play your parts is almost as crucial as the notes themselves. I look forward to seeing your future work!

I was actually astonished by this :)
I epecially loved that pause at 1:16, but the melody following the breakdown did not do it justice. I really liked the way you began the song. Some impressive percussion throughout, although I felt that the cymbals were, at times, a little too loud. Work on the mixing aspect a bit. I would also have liked to see a more distinctive melody, perhaps of a strong synth. Finally, the structure needs more work - it got a little repetitive by 3:20. Oh, I also love the way you ended it :D

Overall, this does have a lot of potential, well done and keep it up!! :)

I really like the snare pattern around 0:45. The song is pretty good, I liked the other one better though.