Different

Well this was kind of "DIFFERENT" I like the instrament choices and they really seemed to work well on this one, the distorted sounds and effects were kind of a nifty idea you should do more of that but also making this louder and more domminant, I liked it though.

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the distorted sounds and effects were kind of a nifty idea you should do more of that but also making this louder and more domminant

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Has an empty building feel to it. Like your walking through an empty office building to get to the top.

I have to say I'm most disappointed in TheDoor6's suggestion that the music has to be cheery, and the music can't carry strange, creepy, or ominous atmospheres.

Regardless, my personal opinion on this song, is that I like the sci fi tendency of the song, and feel it could be carried further with some broader reverb, steady volume increases, and like TheDoor suggested, variation in the "beeps and boops," messing with delays and more reverb. I liked it.

I liked the instrument you used for the chords, but I didn't like the distorted sounds and effects. That wierd synth/sci-fi effect that comes in around :44 seemed irrelevant and almost annoying to me. Sorry. It also wasn't really that relaxing for me, just strange, creepy, and ominous. Maybe you could use some less angry and bass-y instruments and slow down the tempo. It also might help if you transpose the whole piece to a cheerier key. Btw, it gets really repetitive by the end, and I don't like fade-out endings- they almost never add anything to the piece, and they come off as a little bit lazy. I'd suggest you should only use the effects at the very beginning or as transitional instruments, and try to come up with some variations on the "melody" at 1:02 to the end. Sorry to be so tough on you. Perhaps this piece simply isn't my style. Still, it has potential; it just seems incomplete right now. You should keep working on it. :)