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It sounds pretty desend also u really need to recheck the synht that is comming in at 0:55 because that actually ruined the hole song. I personally wouldn't have chosen dubstep like for this but more trance like. but that's up to you. if you ar gonne try to make it more dubstep then MORE BASSSS :D

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it sounds less cluttered than your older version.

I have to agree that the synth sounds a little bit pushed. A little bit repetative. The vocals at the beginning are too short. I would focus more on the beat and the vocals, why not excentuate the best part of the song right? I would keep the ending bit, I like that, it feels like it's coming together, to end. Like you're coming to a conclusion. The synth needs to break up more, different sounds. You have a good edge but it is repetative. Just use 5 seconds of that synth and try breaking in something else for 5 seconds, or 2 and maybe 3 other elements that can be triggered in concession. This could be hard with the drum and bass rhythm. That's why you would want to do it in 5ths or 4th notes. Could work. Play with it. Bring out the vocals, too short at the beginning.

I hope my words don't have spelling mistakes lol. I feel like there might be.

its good. until 0:55 when that ugly synth comes in. It ruined the song. I was thinking some deep bass tones not a semi-dubsteppy wobble fart garble sound. and the vocals are so good it was a shame really.