Sounds really good to me.
Something I did a while ago that ended up inspiring Rainbow Inferno, which you can find at the links below. This is probably the last thing I'll ever write in Logic Pro.
Rainbow Inferno and all my other work can be found at:
http://www.youtube.com/apocalypticsalad
http://supervolcanosmusic.bandcamp.com/
Sounds really good to me.
Awesome work ^_^^^^^^^^^
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.