okay, constructive review time.
the first 3 minutes could be half as long, which would make it twice as good.
the build is okay composition wise, just too long.
white noise helps like A LOT with this stuff.
also, the kick distorted most of the other sounds in the song. when you're mixing, don't boost the kick over everything, cut everything else's lower frequencies until the kick is where you want it! it sounds more complicated, but trust me, i've been there, and it gives it a much better and crisper sound.
as for after the first drop, it sounds pretty good. you may want to break it up a tad by slowly waning the song off the drums, then bringing them back. this technique usually depends on the composition of the song, so it's really up to you!
nice synths though, loved the sounds.
3.5/5
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P.S. you've definitely improved!
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(Hey, skip to 3:10 and listen for about 40 seconds if you're bored.) So, I've produced massively heaping piles of shit in my musical history since I am but a beginner. I've even released a song I thought was awesome after making it onto iTunes. I got one sale. Needless to say, I'm not nearly as good as I thought I was, and I now realize. After about 40 complete/incomplete songs, I feel like this one isn't too terrible. Please, give me feedback. I'm fully aware it has its kinks, like the lead one and a half minutes into the song is kind of off-key when it changes notes. I tried and tried to fix it but something goes wrong when it renders to an audio file, so if you have any kind of solution to the problem, let me know. Check out my other audio submissions and you'll see how much I've improved. Thanks for the listen.
Thanks man. As for the low frequencies, my good headphones recently broke so I'm using earbuds with zero bass. I use EQ's for just about all channels but I can hardly tell when one needs to be let up on the low frequencies. (Edit) I just realized that the distorted sound wasn't an accident. I sidechained the kick to the synth, and I shouldn't have. Those three sounds are just oscillators in one synth, so the whole sound is sidechained.
yeah, like you have said, at 3:10 he still a good song, but are boring cause still repective..
a good dance song have a intro, a climax.. and this parts cannot be boring.. train this.. yuour song starts on 3:10, but have others 3 minutes of music, and what you have?? think it and still producing
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Thanks for the feedback. I can tell you're not too used to English, haha. What's your native language?
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