Ehh
It's a bit weird. Too much going on. Needs bass to add to the "meat" the other guy was talking about
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I may suck but I've done my best..It has a short system of a down I-E-A-I-A-I-O part
hmm
its, uh, interesting. First of all, it isn't r and b. WHat you made is, uh, its own style. See your song needs more meat. Try pad and use a piano roll to add in a riff of your own. Not bad for your second piece.
Soulknot responds:
thanks,i still have to learn a lot to make better things =)
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