I feel content with this version. There's still room for improvement but its a fine piece of music as it is.
This is nice! The beat is really catchy and very industrial, the melody is super catchy and pleasant, the structure is relaxed but not boring, and your choice of sounds is excellent! A fine piece of music indeed.
And I agree with LasciviousGork; good artists are always seeking improvement! Not that I would know first hand mind you, I prefer to be lazy about it.
I used to have the same approach. But, I found myself making the same sounds. Over and over. It nearly made me sick of my own music. I NEEDED new sounds\samples\synth instruments. I prefer to be ever evolving.
A good artist never believes his work is finished. Another fine song.
I love you.
I get a Nine Inch Nails feel from this. Not complaining, mind you.
I was aware of this upon writing the plucked intro. But, every time I tried to re-write it, it just didn't work. All is well though. You have to be influenced by something.
You are free to copy, distribute and transmit this work under the following conditions:
*Please contact me if you would like to use this in a commercial project. We can discuss the details.
ZLEAP 
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