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A new house piece ive been workin on the past few weeks!
Hope you guys enjoy it!
Review it for cookies! :D
I noticed you said that no one ever reviews your stuff on the audio advertisements portal, and I felt bad (used to be the same way for me) so I decided to drop by.
This is a pretty nice song. My biggest problem is probably the pads, which are really buzzy and kinda interfere with the buzziness of the melody. I usually expect the lead to be buzzy, the pads to be smooth. Otherwise there's a clash.
If I'm going to be *really* critical, I'd say that the piece doesn't really go anywhere in its 4 minutes. That's really not too hard to fix with more blatant transitions and instrument changes. One last bit of criticism: the melody towards the end needs a little more spice. That could be a little more tricky, but there are always some easy things to do. Bends and slides are always fun. Plus you could go into higher registers, where things sound more exciting.
Anyway, I enjoyed this. Keep it up. And also, since I found you in audio advertisements, do you think you could review me back if you got the chance? Thanks!
Yea the starter "pads" got a bit buzzy i agree, but i wanted to make some progressive "house" and try that out. I didnt want much change cause it would ruin the progressivness! ;D
Anyway thanx for you review m8! And I will check your music out!
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